Monday, September 4, 2017

September in EW II

Sep. 27 - Summer Review / Chap. 11-12
Activities
1) check summer HW assignments, confirm completion of reading - graded readers
2) check sharing of 後期 Error Logs
3) confirm Chap. 11 exercises, go through Chap. 12
4) preview 後期 Essays
  • Character Essay
  • Symbol-Motif-Theme Essay
  • Author Essay
5) view and discuss presentation: Writing about Characters
6) discuss and assign HW

Homework
1) review assigned summer novel - choose a character to write about
2) make notes about the character - use Character Checklist (make this worksheet)

Oct. 28 - Character Essay
Activities
1) check HW
2) discuss Character-Based Writing Assignments
3) 
4) 
5) discuss and assign HW

Homework
1) Chap. 13 exercises
2) 

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Alternate Activities (Optional)
discuss and assign Character Essay
  • read through outline as class, highlight types of information
  • look at Works Cited entries
  • practice writing Introduction and 1st Body (maybe 2nd also) paragraphs together
  • review and improve outlines





  • look at and work with examples
  • utilize (見・引・定・説・ま)
    discuss 5 Point Paragraphs (Top-QP-Def-Exp-Sum)
    Top       1. State the Topic Sentence point
    Def       3. Define the terms in the quote or paraphrase.
    QP        2. Quote or paraphrase an fact, statistic or expert opinion
    Exp       4. Explain how the idea relates to the topic you’re writing about.
    Sum      5. Summarize the paragraph

      Tuesday, August 29, 2017

      November in EW

      Nov. 2 - Comparison Essay 1 - Discussion of Assignment
      Activities
      1) review students' use of Error Log to correct Classification Essay 2
      2) discuss and assign Unit 9 Comparison - Contrast (Introduction to Academic Writing)
      3) discuss and work with Comparison Essay 1
      4) discuss and assign HW - set deadlines

      Homework
      1) outline Introduction and Conclusion paragraphs
      2) TBD


      Nov. 9 - Comparison Essay 1 - Outlining
      Activities
      1) discuss performance on previous essay
      • overuse of source material - impose limits (20%)
      • review use of Error Log - set up Error Logs for students not yet sharing one
      • update Error Logs according to Instructor's corrections
      2) start outlining Comparison Essay 1 - Differences between Character Types
      3) review use of comparative language from Spring Term
      4) discuss and assign HW - set deadlines

      Homework

      1) complete the outline for Comparison Essay 1
      2) do additional writing exercise?



      Nov. 16 - Comparison Essay 1 - Drafting Body Paragraphs

      Activities
      1) discuss performance on previous essay

      • overuse of source material - impose limits (20%)
      • review use of Error Log - set up Error Logs for students not yet sharing one

      2) do review exercises for contrast structure and comparative adjectives and adverbs
      3) brainstorm for outlining Comparison Essay 1 - Differences between Character Types
      4) discuss and assign HW - set deadlines


      Homework

      1) complete the outline for Comparison Essay 1

      2) TBD


      Nov. 23 - Public Holiday - No class held





      Nov. 30 - Comparison Essay 1 - Drafting Introductions
      Activities
      1) discuss performance on previous essay
      • overuse of source material - impose limits (20%)
      • review use of Error Log - set up Error Logs for students not yet sharing one
      2) start outlining Comparison Essay 1 - Differences between Character Types
      3) review use of comparative language from Spring Term
      4) discuss and assign HW - set deadlines

      Homework
      1) draft Introduction paragraph from outline
      2) draft Body paragraphs A, B and C from outline

      Tuesday, January 10, 2017

      January in EW

      Jan. 13 - Final Essay Students' Choice
      Activities
      1) review Shared Work Record
      2) brainstorm for Introduction paragraphs
      3) review progress on Free Topic Literature Essay document
      • look at outlines
      • make recommendations for further progress
      4) discuss and assign HW

      Homework
      1) outline and draft Free Topic Literature Essay
      2) complete unfinished assignments


      Jan. 18 - Final Essay Students' Choice
      Activities
      1) check on progress of Free Topic Essays
      2) do individual consultation with Ss
      3) complete draft of Free Topic Essay
      4) discuss and assign HW

      Homework

      1) use Error Log to check one's own Free Topic Essay
      2) review Shared Work Record to see if there are any assignments to revise


      Jan. 25 - Progress Check
      Activities
      1) review Shared Work Record
      2) revise and complete all assignments

      Homework

      1) none assigned - end of term

      Wednesday, December 7, 2016

      December in EW

      Dec. 7 - Comparison Essay - Conclusions & Editing
      Activities
      1) discuss performance on current essay
      • overuse of source material - impose limits (20%)
      • check completion rate
      2) discuss conclusions
      3) discuss and assign HW - set deadlines
      4) announce 振替授業 day (Jan. 18)

      Homework
      1) complete the conclusion for Comparison Essay 1
      2) use Error Log to check grammar, spelling, formatting


      Dec. 14 - Free (Semi) Topic Literature Essay - Research
      Activities
      1) make deadline for completion of Comparison Essay
      3) discuss and assign HW - set deadlines

      Homework
      1) complete Comparison Essay by Dec. 16(金)
      2) read sources for topic choice
      3) complete the outline for Free Topic Essay by Dec. 20(火)


      Dec. 21 - Free Topic Literature Essay - Outline
      Activities
      1) complete Comparison Essay, set work schedule
      • Ss not yet finished with Comparison Essay do so
      • Ss finished with Comparison Essay check with Error Log
      2) and share Free Topic Literature Essay document
      look at examples of outlines
      discuss main points
      3) discuss and assign HW

      Homework
      1) outline and draft Free Topic Literature Essay
      2) complete unfinished assignments
      3) enjoy holidays

      Merry Christmas and Happy New Year!

      Wednesday, September 2, 2015

      2014 September-October in EW

      Sep. 24 - Essay Writing & 前期 Review
      Activities
      1) review end of previous text
      2) review new text - provide copies of first section as necessary
      3) discuss Slips VS Errors - review Writing Guide, p. 8 前期テキスト
      4) assign editing - negotiate aspects of editing that are students' responsibility
      5) do peer-editing

      Homework
      1) TBD
      2) TBD

      Oct. 1 - Paragraph 9 (Opinion Paragraph)
      Activities
      1) review Shared Work Record to date
      2) discuss and review Unit 3, pp. 18-23 (New text)
      3) create and share Paragraph 9 (pp. 22-23 Assignment)

      Homework
      1) complete EW Paragraph 9 by Oct. 6
      2) read and do exercises in Unit 3, pp. 18-21

      Oct. 8 - Paragraph 10 (Problem-Solution Paragraph)
      Activities
      1) review progress in Unit 3, pp. 18-21
      2) do peer/self edit on Paragraph 9 as per Step 5, p. 23
      3) discuss and do Unit 4, pp. 24-27
      4) assign, create and share Paragraph 10 (pp. 27-29 Steps 3 & 4)

      Homework
      1) complete EW Paragraph 10 by Oct. 13
      2) complete exercises in Unit 4, pp. 24-27

      Oct. 15 - Paragraph 11 (Cause Paragraph)
      Activities
      1) review progress in Unit 4, pp. 24-27
      2) do peer/self edit on Paragraph 10 as per Step 5, p. 29
      3) assign Unit 5, pp. 30-33 as HW
      4) assign, create and share an outline for EW Paragraph 11 (34-35 Step 3)

      Homework
      1) complete EW Paragraph 10 by Oct. 17
      2) complete exercises in Unit 5, pp. 30-33
      3) complete the outline for EW Paragraph 11 by Oct. 19
      • possible Paragraph 11 topics listed on p. 34
      • outline format shown on p. 34 (create and share outline as google doc)

      Oct. 22 - Paragraph 11 (Effect Paragraph)
      Activities
      1) review progress in Unit 5, pp. 30-33
      2) do group exercises
      3) write Paragraph 11 from your shared google doc outline
      4) assign HW

      Homework
      1) complete EW Paragraph 11 by Oct. 25
      2) complete exercises in Unit 5, pp. 35-38
      3) complete the outline for EW Paragraph 12 by Oct. 27
      • possible Paragraph 12 topics listed on p. 38
      • outline format shown on p. 39 (create and share outline as google doc)

      Oct. 29 - Paragraph 12 (Effect Paragraph)
      Activities
      1) review progress in Chap. 5, pp. 35-36 (Step 4)
      2) complete group exercises
      3) do peer-editing exercise for Paragraph 11 (need worksheet)
      4) do paragraph analysis on Unit 5, pp. 37-38 (Step 5)
      5) create and share an outline for Paragraph 12
      • read Unit 5, Step 6 pp. 38-40
      • create and share the outline on a google doc
      Homework
      1) write Paragraph 12
      2) in the text, read and do Unit 6, pp. 40-43

      Monday, August 31, 2015

      Additional Material

      Chapters 12 & 13: Review & Paragraph to Essay
      Activities
      1) peer evaluation and revision of Paragraph 9 (time limited)
      2) check remaining activities from Chap. 12
      3) assign and do activities from Chap. 13, pp. 84-87
      4) assign Assignment, p. 87

      Homework
      1) complete Chap. 13 exercises, pp. 84-87
      2) do Assignment, p. 87
      • create and share the above assignment with the instructor <choskins@kyoritsu-wu.ac.jp>
      • document title: EW last name Essay 1
      • finish making an outline and Works Cited for Paragraph 10 by July 26
      • finish writing Paragraph 10 by July 28
      3) obtain the 後期 text: From Paragraph to Essay
      4) read the first Chapter

      Thursday, July 30, 2015

      EW Summer Homework

      1) write the Classification Paragraph(8月15日は締切)
      2) do all Chapter 11 exercises, pp. 74-78
      3) write the Comparison and Contrast Paragraph(8月31日は締切)